I was thinking about giving up on my poetry...I want Your opinion.?

Question

(I have always loved writing poetry and getting more into spoken word but at this moment I am going through changes and was thinking maybe I should stop)

Soaring to new heights, not blinded by the sun's light. For inside my nest I lay eggs and as the protecter I am too fly reminding you I will not get caught in your web that was designed for trapping perfection. Never going to reach rock bottom again cause venom is hiding behind every broken branch. I am free. Don't disturb me mentally. I watch from the mountain top and see how society seems to posses nature. Trying to retify something that is intangabile. I see your potential, boxed in with holes which and inside you feel the rejection and the disrespect from whom it was that clipped your wings. If Sky is the Limit I wish to reach the solar atmosphere where stars are risen and not fallen. A place where I can console lost souls and prepare them for the future. For I am the living testimony. I hold perspective high awaiting for more than your understatement of what you see before your eyes. For you envy on the inside that you can't cage me or make me sing unto lullabies. For I drink from the well of youth and my beak opens to sing undying truths, I am Heaven's sent instrument, a tool unto you. So therefore please don't try to cage beauty. Please don't cage beauty with your lustful desires nor your flattery which may fascinate me but does not appeal to me. Destiny was designed for you to reach the best. As if this is God's play and I watch as you perfom your best in character but your just dwelling within a pigeons nest. For vultures literally do **** to cool themselves off. Awaiting in air prowling as a Lion hidden in the field of colors that matches his description. So no, no fowl play here. I just watch and I listen, I watch and I listen to Life. With a heart as hard as gold I do sometimes do the same thing twice or more just for the affection That I personally yearn for. I'm not you nor of this World. Just refined as a piece of the puzzle to mend the wholeness that seemed to slowly rot as solitary confidement does for those that lost their dreams while in the "whole". I watch as you deeply bite and leave your inprint on the Apple that taste so sweet as PIE. that was picked from MY Tree but oh how it sours your stomach, how it sours your stomach because you misunderstood Me. Don't pick where I lay my eggs don't disturb my nest for then I will have your eye and will turn you into the apple of my eye. Again I say, I am soaring to new heights and I don't move from mountain to mountain but the mountains move for me because as a visionary tell me what it is that you don't see about me. And I will have to reply that you have not flown to were I've been so therefore you can't reach to where I am going and that my present gift is not a lie.
©Nicole C. Humphries (Skittle)

Answer 1

Yes, you should stop!



I'm just kidding :) I like this very much and it would be sad not to write if you have the talent and you enjoy it. Again, on the other side, if you have lack of inspiration or a creative mess in your head which can't be transferred on the paper you should take a break.

I also write poetry since i was 10 or so and i have some long periods behind me when I didn't write a single word but still I'm a poet and I always get back writing.

Answer 2

That sounded dumb, of course what I refer to here is your comment about deciding to stop poetry because of changes in your life.



If anything, that's WHY we all write poetry! It's to help us reveal, not just to others, but to ourselves, why/what we are truly feeling.



I mean, you're no TS Eliot...and you have a few cliches and a few banal analogies, but what's great about your writing is that it flows great and there are some sentences in this poem that really show a unique perspective coming from your seemingly forlorn eye. You should try to increase your vocabulary. This could really turn you into a decent poet in my opinion. I didn't understand a few lines in your poem, but that's natural, or maybe they're not meant to be rational.



BUT I don't know... If you feel your poetry is hurting your life then give it up. If you are just bored try to branch out and find something different (short stories, novels, prose poems, lyrical poems, etc.). If you think you're a bad writer then that's dumb, because you can easily improve yourself by reading novels or poetry and learning more vocabulary and getting a better grasp of what "creative uniqueness" means to you.

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