I want way similar to what is described in the Dead Poets Society.
Three answers:
Dancing Bee
2007-05-10 11:48:15 UTC
You can take it down to the local open mic and give it a shot and see what happens... OR ... you could go to a credible site with earnest authors on it like http://www.alsopreview.com
in either case you will get HONEST criticism, so wear you tough skin.
La Lulu
2007-05-13 23:50:12 UTC
If your poem brings happiness to you then rate it a "10", don't care what others think. You have to write for yourself and if it speaks to others, well, that's fine too!