Poets Only: Can you add the perfect mate to this new haiku?

Question:

the cheese whisperer

2017-02-12 16:07:11 UTC

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a good haiku drifts
pursuing modest breezes
on butterfly wings

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CW

Four answers:

THE BANNIBAL ONE

2017-02-12 16:17:50 UTC

As I drift asleep,

people croak in the woodland,

providing plant food.

neonman

2017-02-13 12:31:48 UTC

As to trolls, I've had at least 7 appeals upheld now so whoever has been doing this must be losing credibility.

Floogins

2017-02-13 00:38:23 UTC

Haiku should focus on nature (rather than, say, the author's writing of the haiku).

2017-02-12 17:09:38 UTC

Idiots who don't

know jackshit about haiku

keep on yammering

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