Question:
Can you write an impromptu poem? If so please delight me with what you got?
superdiana4000
2007-05-10 06:36:28 UTC
Inspired by this morning's cheerios?....or has beauty captured you at this very moment?

I just want to see people's " On the Spot" reactions from four lines to whatever inspire's you.

Write me a Poem

Thank you
Seven answers:
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2007-05-10 11:52:53 UTC
Turning from realities

That press themselves upon my mind,

I wander free in cyber worlds

And there a certain solace find.
liero_67
2007-05-14 12:15:38 UTC
I am not a prophet or a teacher

I am a failure of God

Standing in a circle of my brothers

Their fangs out



Every thing I had I gave to you

Every time I tried I would lose

Its hard not to shake with a gun in your mouth



Every time I try I hear my mothers voice

And see my mothers eyes

But when hers close

I'm scared so will mine

You are no brothers



Filing out of the church of Cain

Like a thousand foot pious snake

Hiding its sins deep in its stomach

Digesting them one at a time



And your voice is a sounding trumpet

Announcing the mountains that you've moved

But love is the farthest thing from you
jube
2007-05-10 15:15:52 UTC
On the spur of the minute:



An Impromtu Doggerel



There once was a guy on Yahoo,

who started his day with impromptu.

The gallery was full

with anticipation to do

what he couldn’t do with impromptu
Robert David M
2007-05-10 13:54:58 UTC
OK Four Lines



I never knew palm trees, 'til I found

San Diego, where thousands abound;

Where they're etch'd to skies

Grey or golden each night

When fronds rustle 'til bright stars come out...
Erin C
2007-05-10 13:46:53 UTC
Here's my on the spot poem:



Each night I pray

For help the coming day

I ask forgivness for my sin

And hope for innocent children



Best I could do - I know it has no meter or whatever...
soxy190
2007-05-10 15:59:51 UTC
My name my address

brown paper package totally unexpected

hope lost in the mail forgotten and abandoned

Memories rekindled I become a child again
my2centsworth
2007-05-10 13:53:08 UTC
Roses are red,

Violets are blue,

I wrote this poem,

Just for you.

:)


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