i've been writing poetry 31yrs.tell me what you think?

Question

POEM
''REASONS''
This poem speaks of truth,with much definition.Reality has arrived without premonition


There's a REASON for everything no matter what it is,Like the labor a mother encounters during the birth of her kids.

There's also a REASON,for all hurt & pain.A REASON is a lie,that someone must explain.
There's a REASON for life,it's god's blueprint for you.Follow his instructions,it's what he wants from you.

There's a REASON that we smile something enlightened your heart.There's a REASON to the end,and a REASON for the start.

There's a REASON we face trial and tribulation it's god's way of saying:"kneel down for prayer and meditation.

There's a REASON for the rainbow,that appears after the rain.It's god's solemn promise that wasn't made in vain.
There's a REASON for life,we live on borrowed time,in life everything expires,so eventually we end up dying.

There's a REASON the weather changes.it's called four seasons.for everything we encounter,they all have their REASONS!!!!!

BY; SHAWANDA HANLEY OUTLAW

Answer 1

It's cool. It has an interesting rhythm.

Answer 2

I write with the impression that you are trying to impress. The image of an underage delitante comes to mind. I have no heart, but unfortunately even the Grinch shed a few tears for the Innocent ignorance that he saw manifested in that small community known only as Whoville. Upon having seen the simplicity of the inhabitants, he abandoned his hermits life in the wilderness and returned to his children with the mystery the bread and the authority. Has there ever been a more crueler slur. I think not.

M.

Answer 3

What poets have you been reading during those 31 years? This is very weak writing, poor technique, and filled with abstractions.