lets paint the town red?

Question

paint the town red

enough with the crying moaning and regrets
its time to move on and forget
forgive the devil for hes bored of flying
save your heart because its dying
theres going to be more disapointments headed your way
so forget your problems and go on with your day
she didnt mean to hurt you ,she made a mistake
he said hes sorry forgive him for goodsake
paint the town red untill you feel alive
color the ocean blue then dive
do not regret the past for its nessacassry
do not be embass of yourflaws just pick them up and carry
then.............
paint the town red with ribbions and clovers
if your made a mistake erase and start over

Answer 1

couple things :: thanks for sharing your poem....i really really like it....just to fix er on up..here's my thoughts :





instead of GOODSAKE.. making it godsake, sounds better--u may have even meant that, and just mistyped....

and where it sais COLOR THE OCEAN BLUE, add, than TAKE A dive.

spelled neccessary wrong (not sure if mine right either)

put a space between YOUR and FLAWS.

ribbons spelled wrong.

last line...should read IF YOU'VE MADE A MISTAKE, ERASE AND START OVER..



u write just like i do! ALL my poems seem to have to rhymes in a row etc.. just like that.. i think it flows sooo nicely!



oh and disappointments is the correct spelling..

Answer 2

I'm with ya, I will grab my paint brush.

Answer 3

hmmm



is that a song or a poem....and did you make it up?



pretty good =]

i like...



i'll join you.

aha

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