Rate my poem, 1 to 10?

Question

Rate my poem, 1 to 10?

Answer 1

It's a letter to your wife from the drunk she has lived with for too long. It's a drunk-a-log...no more and no less. I'm glad you've finally put into words what you've been feeling but it cannot end there. For the sake of yourself and your child get into AA and try to get her to attend GA meetings. You'll die a tragic death if you continue this way of life. You ARE responsible for your child, at the very least. Forget about the smoking for now...help her and you to living again.

Answer 2

8

It really is good, lots of feelings and emotions behind the words.

A few grammar issues, doesn't really matter. . .

Maybe it's just how I read it, but I couldn't get a rhythmic feel while reading it.



The subject, plot, and ending is 10+ work though :D

good job.

Answer 3

4 v.v' sorry if that's harsh.

Answer 4

10