Good Poem? Please read and review!?

Question

Best Friends

I was always longing, until one faithful day, I sat upon the windowsill to look down and hear you say. "Good Morning my dear friend!" Although I had never met you, you took me by the hand. We danced and sang a happy tune until we reached the sand. We swam into the ocean depths, I was never terrified, everytime I looked around, you were always by my side. How glad I am to have a friend like you, to swim with in the tide.

I wrote this for my best friend. Please give an honest response!

Answer 1

I write poetry myself are style and genre may be different but i still like it. Anyway if your not into publishing or selling your work then its ok to post on here cause anyone could just copy and paste and claim this as their own.

Answer 2

I think it is very sweet. Could use a little work, but overall a good effort.

Answer 3

i write poetry and this is the best poem your friend should love it. it is so good it should be on a card. this is the truth.

Answer 4

complicated concern no link between the two diverse matters the rhyming interior the top became merely no longer a thank you to end it. how can cabinets be a e book????? mountains???? no offense yet definitely its merely words prepare

Answer 5

Cool.

Answer 6

I think that it very good. I write poetry too.

Answer 7

It sounded nice, and sincere. Good job.

Answer 8

i love it! it really explains how frends are with each other every step of the way

Answer 9

Want the truth? I think it is pretty cheesey and i don't like it.

Answer 10

I hat it...it`s awwful. Twee, preposterous rubbish.

Answer 11

its a nice poem

Answer 12

good words