Question:
Greatest War Poem?
anonymous
2007-10-29 02:35:45 UTC
For my money its

The Death of the Ball Turret Gunner
by Randall Jarrell

From my mother's sleep I fell into the State,
And I hunched in its belly till my wet fur froze.
Six miles from earth, loosed from the dream of life,
I woke to black flak and the nightmare fighters.
When I died they washed me out of the turret with a hose

---Anyone got a favourite?-----
Eight answers:
johnny_sunshine2
2007-10-29 04:02:34 UTC
Hands down, it's The Illiad, but here's a fave of mine:





In Flanders Fields



In Flanders fields the poppies blow

Between the crosses, row on row,

That mark our place; and in the sky

The larks, still bravely singing, fly

Scarce heard amid the guns below.



We are the Dead. Short days ago

We lived, felt dawn, saw sunset glow,

Loved, and were loved, and now we lie

In Flanders fields.



Take up our quarrel with the foe:

To you from failing hands we throw

The torch; be yours to hold it high.

If ye break faith with us who die

We shall not sleep, though poppies grow

In Flanders fields



John McCrae



There's a great flying poem, I think from WWI, from a flyer who didn't make it back, but I can't remember it, nor find it quickly.
synopsis
2007-10-29 02:43:43 UTC
it is interesting how when people talk of war poetry they usually assume that the best poetry came out of wwi.



your poem is from wwii, and is excellent.



here is another wwii poem, from the north african campaign:









Three weeks gone and the combatants gone

returning over the nightmare ground

we found the place again, and found

the soldier sprawling in the sun.



The frowning barrel of his gun

overshadowing. As we came on

that day, he hit my tank with one

like the entry of a demon.



Look. Here in the gunpit spoil

the dishonoured picture of his girl

who has put: Steffi. Vergissmeinnicht.

in a copybook gothic script.



We see him almost with content,

abased, and seeming to have paid

and mocked at by his own equipment

that's hard and good when he's decayed.



But she would weep to see today

how on his skin the swart flies move;

the dust upon the paper eye

and the burst stomach like a cave.



For here the lover and killer are mingled

who had one body and one heart.

And death who had the soldier singled

has done the lover mortal hurt.
Lauren F
2007-10-29 09:02:43 UTC
Martin Espada



Blues for the Soldiers Who Told You

"I'm like a country who can't remember the last war."

Doug Anderson

They told you that the enemy and the liberated throng

swaddle themselves in the same robes and rags,

wear the same masks with eyes that follow you,

pray in the same bewildering tongue, until your rifle

trembles to rake the faces at every checkpoint.

They told you about the corpse of a boy or girl

rolled at your feet, hair gray with the powder

of rubble and bombardment, flies a whirlpool blackening both eyes,

said you¹ll learn the words for apology too late to join

the ceremony, as flies become the chorus of your nightmares.

They told you about the double amputee from your town,

legs lopped off by the blast, his basketball friend

bumping home in a flag-draped coffin

the cameras will not film anymore,

about veterans who drench themselves in liquor

like monks pouring gasoline on their heads.



They told you in poems and stories

you did not read, or stopped reading

as your cheeks scorched with inexplicable fever,

and because they spoke with a clarity that burned your face,

because they saw with the vision of a telescope

revolving around the earth, they spent years wandering

through jails and bars, exiled to roads after midnight

where gas stations snap their lights off one by one,

seers unseen at the coffee shop waiting for bacon and eggs,

calling at 3 AM to say I can¹t stop writing and you have to hear this.



You will not hear this, even after the war is over

and the troops drown in a monsoon of desert flowers

tossed by the crowd, blooming in their mouths

to stop their tongues with the sweetness of it.





Carolyn Forche

The Garden Shukkei-en





By way of a vanished bridge we cross this river

as a cloud of lifted snow would ascend a mountain.



She has always been afraid to come here.



It is the river she most

remembers, the living

and the dead both crying for help.



A world that allowed neither tears nor lamentation.



The matsu trees brush her hair as she passes

beneath them, as do the shining strands of barbed wire.



Where this lake is, there was a lake,

where these black pine grow, there grew black pine.



Where there is no teahouse I see a wooden teahouse

and the corpses of those who slept in it.



On the opposite bank of the Ota, a weeping willow

etches its memory of their faces into the water.



Where light touches the face, the character for heart is written.



She strokes a burnt trunk wrapped in straw:

I was weak and my skin hung from my fingertips like cloth



Do you think for a moment we were human beings to them?



She comes to the stone angel holding paper cranes.

Not an angel, but a woman where she once had been,

who walks through the garden Shukkei-en

calling the carp to the surface by clapping her hands.



Do Americans think of us?



So she began as we squatted over the toilets:

If you want, I'll tell you, but nothing I say will be enough.



We tried to dress our burns with vegetable oil.



Her hair is the white froth of rice rising up kettlesides, her mind also.

In the postwar years she thought deeply about how to live.



The common greeting dozo-yiroshku is please take care of me.

All hibakusha still alive were children then.



A cemetery seen from the air is a child's city.



I don't like this particular red flower because

it reminds me of a woman's brain crushed under a roof.



Perhaps my language is too precise, and therefore difficult to understand?



We have not, all these years, felt what you call happiness.

But at times, with good fortune, we experience something close.

As our life resembles life, and this garden the garden.

And in the silence surrounding what happened to us



it is the bell to awaken God that we've heard ringing.





And the book, "Here, Bullet" by Brian Turner (poems of his experiences as a Medic in Iraq).
Lady Annabella-VInylist
2007-10-29 02:53:13 UTC
Arthur Rimbaud, Le Dormeur du val (The Sleeper in the Valley), inspired by the Franco-Prussian war of 1870-1.



The Sleeper in the Valley



It is a green hollow where a stream gurgles,

Crazily catching silver rags of itself on the grasses;

Where the sun shines from the proud mountain:

It is a little valley bubbling over with light.



A young soldier, open-mouthed, bare-headed,

With the nape of his neck bathed in cool blue cresses,

Sleeps; he is stretched out on the grass, under the sky,

Pale on his green bed where the light falls like rain.



His feet in the yellow flags, he lies sleeping. Smiling as

A sick child might smile, he is having a nap:

Cradle him warmly, Nature: he is cold.



No odour makes his nostrils quiver;

He sleeps in the sun, his hand on his breast

At peace. There are two red holes in his right side.





Another translation I found. I don't know which one is best, as the poem is so familiar to me in French:





It’s a green hollow where a river sings

Wildly tangling on the grass in silver

Tatters; where the sun, above a proud mountain

Shines: it’s a tiny valley foaming with light.



A young soldier, mouth open, head bare,

And nape bathing in the blue watercress

Sleeps; outstretched on the grass, under the sky,

Pale in his green bed where daylight rains.



Feet in the gladiolas, he sleeps. Smiling

Like a sick child would, he’s having a nap:

Nature, lull him warmly: he is cold.



Sweet smells never quiver his nostrils;

He sleeps in the sun, hand on his chest,

Calm. There’re two red holes in his right side.
anonymous
2017-01-04 19:13:30 UTC
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Dancing Bee
2007-10-29 08:03:04 UTC
You posted my favorite. And someone else posted "In Flanders Field" those two were the first to spring into my mind after reading the question.
LELAND
2007-10-29 22:50:37 UTC
Gunga Din-R. Kipling
hammyspoon
2007-10-29 03:04:23 UTC
charge of the light brigade - Alfred lord tennyson



too long to write it all up though


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