Question:
It Never Gets Old.. what do you guys think!?
2010-07-16 15:28:14 UTC
Haha my ex boyfriends wrote this to me a while ago.. and it just hi tlike a ton of bricks.. I didn;t know what to think or do... ahh, any advice? or feekback?

It Never Gets Old...
I was lost and I didn't know what to do. Everyday I dug a hole that was leading to the end. Then one day a beautiful girl looked down the hole and told me to come out. As I struggled to the top she kept pulling me with all her strength. I still remember that day, she looked at me with her big eyes and breathtaking smile. She talked to me as I sat next to her and from that moment on I knew that she was the one for me. Everyday I went to the park to see her because her brother didn't really like the fact of her seeing guys, but i didn't care because it never gets old when I see her face. It's as if the whole world stops at her presence. I told her that she saved me from what I thought had to happen to my life, but now I realize I have her to live for. She is the only reason for me living at this moment. If it wasn't for her id be down in the dirt. It never gets old when she talks to me, I try to hold my tears because I am just in disbelief that this girl is mine, everyday I thank god for bringing this angel into my life. I owe my life to her and I try to do everything for her to show that I appreciate her existance. I buy her gifts and write her letters, but I hope she knows that anything I buy or write for her can never show how much I absolutely love her. Everyday I wake up just for the fact that im going to see her again, even if it's for 1 second, because that second feels like a lifetime. and at the same time it goes all too fast. but it's okay because i know that one day me and her are going to be together with no wirries in our mind just me and her living our lives to the fullest. because it never gets old when she says "I love you", everytime she says those words tears come to my eyes as if it was the first day I met her. (=
Three answers:
Atilla
2010-07-16 15:40:57 UTC
I think he has too much time on his hands, that's what I think. Try getting a manlier boyfriend; this is ridiculous. How old are you guys? Sixteen, seventeeen??? LOL
2010-07-16 23:03:59 UTC
If you wake up for the fact of only seeing her. God that's terrible. Anyways... nice poem.

I've always found it dramatic when ppl say things like that.

A real poem is when you write Love Shack out by the B52's in "poem form".

lol.
Elaine P...is for Poetry
2010-07-16 23:45:20 UTC
Your ex is a little over-dramatic, but he is one to express his feelings. That is very rare in a boy/man, as you see from the answers above me. He obviously cares for you. (Because he is not a good poet does not make him a bad person).


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