Question:
My New Poem about Kirby. C/C and I will high five random cars?
2010-08-10 09:20:44 UTC
Question. Please c/c and help me decide a new title for this poem

Should I title my new Poem - Kirby from Neverland? Or "Kirby, Passenger of the Yellow Submarine."


Yo check it…one two three, you know me
Earth King of Omashu, who else could it be
Skipping village to village, become a Poetry Lord
because my pen is mightier than my sword.

My partner in crime, named Kirby Kirby
She’s running on hay, like she’s in the derby
She’ll take your money, kick you to the Curby
donate money to the toy named Furby

Her name is Kirby, tha’s K - I - R - B - Y
Give her some cherry, and she’ll P - A - R - T - Y
I’m gonna try a style of a new poem here,
individual letters, oh look a deer….

K, K, that letter shaped like a bent Cup
Shake with those fries, I need some Ketchup
K is for keys, that I hide in my shoe
K to the ING of OMASHU

OMG is that Saurons Eye, no my friend..its the letter ‘ I ‘
I is for Ice cream and an ice rink.
I is for the Ice I like in my drink.
‘I’ don’t know how it can sound like a growl
‘I’ was hard, cuz its only a vowel

RRRRRrrrrrrrrrr, Ricky Ricardo coming to rush ya,
Kirby roars rabid rain from Russia
like a rodent running and rolling
race car driving with some rust unfoiling

Beep. Beep. Here comes the letter ‘ B
Born in Brazil, Kirby stings like a bee
busting buildings like Benjamin Button
Babe, be broiling some burnt mutton.

Y like Coldplays Yellow, mellow, jello
We could be watching some Goodfellows
Why, did you give me some yellow yarn?
We should be yo yoing in my barn.

***This poem is a mess, but you’ve made it this far…..you will become an honorary guest of Omashu City
Five answers:
Kirby
2010-08-10 09:42:34 UTC
my innuendo detector is going off

that's not an innuendo *cough*

no talk of watermelons, what a feat

why the heck do people tweet?

scattered thoughts, man what're you on?

Idc as long as your name ain't John

I'm writing you a badazz rap

just wait and do not bust a cap
A Poetic Storm Has Died.
2010-08-10 19:47:00 UTC
Jasdeep, heyyyy





I loved it. and maybe name it Kirby from Neverland?



anyways great poem, and I'm okay I guess.



IM me, lol sorry I missed you last night.





Ya Biggest Fan = me. lol
2010-08-11 00:07:11 UTC
How much fun are you guys allowed to have?
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2010-08-10 16:44:35 UTC
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You know, I love it, for you and Kirby...are wicked cool!



Did you see the song I sent for you both?

just in case you missed it...here it is.



http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=pYh2Jv48mko





EDIT: Seems I have the Emily's after me now...I should have

guessed... I am glad you like'd it...
2010-08-10 18:34:28 UTC
woo!

Ronnie...I like that song!


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