Question:
Can you help me find the word?
anonymous
2010-01-20 05:47:03 UTC
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I go down
and drown
in the sound
of a noun
on which you expound
and compound
until fear comes around
and your tears
stain the ground
where once we had found
a home for hope to abound
old words do redound
and your knell does resound
now comes around
I hone my fractured crown
pointing the point inbound
cutting the shell I surround
my world in round
at the power of one noun
that can astound
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Seven answers:
jacqua
2010-01-21 04:11:14 UTC
Perhaps you are still traumatized from a difficult birth experience, still getting over the stress of the move down the birth canal,,...do you subconsciously want to get back to the womb...I think you might be looking for "woman", most men are looking to get as close to going back to that bliss, before as is possible,there are lots of words I could give you to describe where it's at, poetic porn but they would only sensor and kick me off the site if I did.
anonymous
2010-01-20 20:42:34 UTC
Could be a hound - sold by the pound - or put into a pound - which would be a profound impound - which would show thinking unsound - for this hound dog - should have been on a parade ground. ♥

http://likabel.tripod.com/hound_dog_portrait_smllr.jpg
anonymous
2010-01-21 03:00:38 UTC
You couldn't find a word that meant anything if it hit you in the face.
Je sais qu'une vie ne suffit pas
2010-01-20 15:59:13 UTC
Awesome! It doesn't even sound as if the rhymes were forced. Makes sense =]
shirleyf
2010-01-20 14:23:04 UTC
Well rounded poem, HP.
Sandy Giggles
2010-01-20 15:52:43 UTC
BRAVO!



does that help ya?



nicely done :)



I have attempted something similar before, Thanks for a good example to follow...



I like this :)



*Reg, funny!*
Regwah
2010-01-20 14:41:06 UTC
It happens noun & again.


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