Question:
Only a Test. Will you c/c please?
lovechild
2013-07-11 00:28:28 UTC
Electric blue and ultraviolet bolts,
schisms, spasms and surreal scenes,
brainstorming synthesis
synapse snap-ins
gears grind, slip a notch out of sync
screeching
bone-on-bone painful
fingernails on slate

unbidden thoughts
become entities
to hide identity
me, myself and why?
If I did it, it was in jest,
I got through it
it was only a test.
Fourteen answers:
?
2013-07-12 01:29:47 UTC
You bare your soul for us Firecat...in all its aching beauty. Thank you.

Only the brave will test themselves...through the furnace to turn to silver.
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anonymous
2013-07-12 16:42:09 UTC
electric blue is sizzling..



ultraviolet bolts is extra-powerful...



entities hiding identities: very nice...



only a test - tests can conclude a lot about a person - right or wrong answers.



Great piece.
Hope Leslie Shy
2013-07-11 08:59:43 UTC
This poem makes me think of a student's mind wandering off while in a classroom, to the point where they don't see the other people in the room, and instead see spirits and imaginary creatures.
Oakwolf
2013-07-12 11:01:01 UTC
This free-flow of loose word current is what I like best about your work, haven't seen anything like it from you in a while. Not that I've seen ANYthing in a while, so there's that. I enjoyed.
Happy Hiram
2013-07-11 15:45:41 UTC
I feel as if my nerves have been tested. Good, in a way. Bad in a good way.
Christine H
2013-07-12 09:17:29 UTC
Now this speaks to me!



Yep good title!
?
2013-07-11 07:51:38 UTC
Ummmmnnn...not too inviting....I`ll `pass` on this one!

`Rider of the Storm`? :p xxx...hope you`d a Zen moment!



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anonymous
2013-07-11 01:17:34 UTC
I like it but the words seemed a bit too messy, maybe try using a bit of alliteration, or making the words more like sentences with words in between to explain better. Its a wonderful poem, and you obviously have talent, just my opinion :)
5 ft 7 Texas Heaven
2013-07-11 05:16:04 UTC
I think the well done clipped format is quite electric, and to test oneself we often come against our most critical judge, ourselves.
Sandy Giggles
2013-07-11 06:29:29 UTC
a test now passed



with flying colors...hmm



anyway, I like it



Carey Ball
2013-07-12 23:37:29 UTC
You took LSD and meth at the same time?
Scooter_The_Squirrel_Agent
2013-07-12 09:18:48 UTC
Another good one. :)
Nat
2013-07-11 01:49:37 UTC
The only "test" I ever liked.

In fact, this is "right up my alley".

You're experimenting with format.

That's always refreshing to see and read.

I love your magnetic, stimulating wit.

Thanks for this, LC.


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