A Dead Man's Warning?

Question

AMONG CHILDREN WHO SUFFER
ENDLESS CRIES TO ONE ANOTHER
WHY MUST THEY ENDURE PAIN
WITHOUT A TRUTH GIVEN TO GAIN

DO NOT QUESTION MY AFFLICTION
INTENTIONS FOREVER TO INFLICTION
TO THE WICKED WHO DON T KNOW
WE SHALL REAP WHAT WILL SOW

A HUNDRED YEARS TO YOUR LIFE
PRAY THAT THERE IS NO AFTERLIFE
IF MY KIN AND I WERE TO EXIST
BE FEARFUL OF OUR VENGEFUL LIST

Answer 1

How the hell did I miss this ?



I have my paper fork with it I shall stuff you re soul with straw

And later

a big burning fire there will be waiting

here in the halls of hell ,

It get s worse,

The Bell s The Bell s will ring in your brain,

you will hiss and spit in so much pain

be terrified it s inevitable

your fate is to suffer in HELL !



a poetry contributions to the wicked People in this world

Every one will meet there maker ..



I really like your poem , it s a message we should all think about .



Keep writing

Answer 2

A Dead Man's Warning?



Your stirring words brought immediately to mind the work of that great Scottish poet of the Victorian era, William Topaz McGonagall. His verse brought tears to the eyes of all who read it! Not fully appreciated in his time, his work found fame later with the rise of the "so shite it's kin brilliant" genre

Your work differs only in that it must remain in the "so shite it's kin shite" category

Don't give up your day job - the literary world isn't quite ready for you yet!

Answer 3

surely 'dead man's shouting'

Answer 4

Dead man typing, deadly.

Answer 5

It has a dire warning to us from Satan as I see it..



You can make it flow better by correcting minor errors.



A few word changes and it will be OK.



AMONG CHILDREN WHO SUFFER

ENDLESS CRIES TO ONE ANOTHER

WHY MUST THEY ENDURE PAIN

WITHOUT TRUTH GIVEN TO GAIN.



DO NOT QUESTION MY INFLICTIONS

PAIN FOREVER,YOUR AFFLICTIONS

TO THE WICKED WHO DON T KNOW

WE SHALL REAP WHAT WE SOW.



A HUNDRED YEARS TO YOUR STRIFE

PRAY THAT THERE IS NO AFTERLIFE

IF MY KIN AND I WERE TO EXIST

BE FEARFUL OF OUR VENGEFUL LIST.

Answer 6

Don't quit your day job.

Answer 7

Did you use a random word generator to create that rant?

Answer 8

guess its what you want it to be?

Answer 9

Okay.

Answer 10

*yawn* did you say somethin?