What do you think About this?

Question

Crashing burning
It's a hurtin
They call me lame
It's a shame
Cause it's true
What can i do
Better yet
How can I prove
I'm worth the time
I'm worth the crime
I keep it trill
Keep it 300
What's the point
When no ones for it
I wish I was fake
Then people might
Make the mistake
And fall for me
Keep me warm
And comfy
It's a shame
I wish I weren't lame.

Answer 1

If you want honesty.. It sucks.

Answer 2

Good beginning, the end needs some work though, if you start with q certain style you can't change mid-poem, that makes it sound weird

Answer 3

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