Ain't It Grand, comments welcome?

Question

I'm in a mood today. Picture the song "Everybody knows" rythym covered by Sex Pistols. Everybody needs a little punk on a rainy day with a melloncholy perk. (Don't ask, but write what you know...I was still nice, but inspiration comes at the oddest times).

Ain't it grand today,
Since you've gone away,
Ain't it grand,
Ain't it grand,
So long,
Go away,
Ain't it grand.
Woke up in a school bus,
Wearing strippers clothes,
Don't you want to know,
What you'll never know,
Ain't it grand today,
Just go away,
You'll never now,
Ain't it grand today.

Answer 1

It's grand! Refreshing--the upbeat of the conductor's hand.

I admit I'm also relating to GO AWAY, as I've just now banished someone from my life. But, aside from that, what a "grand" attitude.

Answer 2

I like it and it gave me a chuckle. Ain't it grand today!

Answer 3

Clouds appear to have parted finally, to let the Sunshine filter through...

Answer 4

Survival with a measure of entusiasm. I really like it. Good images.

Answer 5

You ARE in a mood today. I like it, but I like them all.

Answer 6

i think it's really good. you could enter it in a competition or something.

Answer 7

Well, I agree with one thing you said:



"Just go away."

Answer 8

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