What say to "Galaxy Dancing" Poem?

Question

Dancing galaxies, round, round...
Closer, then apart.
Never changing partners...
Only each other...

Andromeda and the Milky Way.
Billions of years in the making.
Billions of years in the dancing.
Stirring round in the bowl

Of Making, like Mother making
Her cake. Ingredients of stars,
Matter, dust...layered nicely.
Star icing with suns between

Layers of planets, asteroids,
Comets plotting new courses.
Then, merging together, like
Lovers in Eternity.

Two Spirals joined into one..

Answer 1

I think it's an amazing dance of words that takes me off this planet & puts me out where all this is happening. Surrounded by the the stars, the galaxies, the planets, all doing their beautiful waltz through time.



In other words, I love it.

Answer 2

It's a good question whether we're two galaxies or one, we lack the distance for perspective and a clear concept of the composition of the universe. It is definitely a dance, arms come together and spiral out, and each star is a sun, sometimes two or three. Our own even appears to be a binary linked with a brown sun.

Answer 3

This is a delicious cooking lesson. A galaxy of ingredients made palatable by mothers expertise with the mixing bowl while dancing around her own kitchen, her face smudged with the dust of flour.



Can I lick the spoon mom?

Answer 4

ahhh,,, the mental images that danced through my mind as I read this,,, not something so abstract or far out into space as galaxies, but closer to home in a developing relationship many years ago when we were forced to be many hundreds of miles apart for a few years.



Yes, I am a sap,,, this I freely admit.



One of the things I admire about many of your poems is the levels you achieve, intentional or not.



Very nice.

Answer 5

You have created a vision in my head of the 2 galaxies joining and becoming a third larger body, maybe with planets and stars acting as electrons in a massive covalent bonding.

Answer 6

I knew God was a woman!



The whole poem dances and whirls like the ingredients in my mixing bowl....except the end result is somewhat more spectacular.



(I particularly like the the sneaky lines - Never changing partners....only each other.... (I've been secretly moulding my dear one for almost 35 years - he's just about perfect now)

Answer 7

Astronomy isn't my fervitude....

but I sure got a lot of dust around here.....



Chicken Whisperer.!!!



I'm learning blondie...

but let me tell ya something....

you're not exactly Audrey Hepburn.!!!



You must be related to King Arthur

You run like a Gazelle

You need 20 more brush strokes...

don't even think about it...

You're already "fully loaded"

real life can be a fairy tale.

Answer 8

Well it seems that your amazing me yet again,,,, How your words all come together to form the Galaxies,,,,

With a little help from the Science Channel,,,,,,,,,Well Done Well Said & Well,,,, Thank You

Answer 9

Can I lick the beaters and the bowl? I love star frosting.

Answer 10

A spatial poem from a special person. Great job.

Answer 11

Pliable planetary pleasures....A big Bang Theory....Nice

Answer 12

you mean all this dust around here i can make a cake?

awesome Ely!

Answer 13

Makes me think of an Ice Cream Sundae.



Can I have more...........



Pleeeeeze !!!

Answer 14

This is an interesting writing, as well as a mind stimulant. You and Dondi have awakened my wits tonight with your two postings. Thanks.