Question:
whats an honest to God good love poem? not just rainbows and butterfly's..?
anonymous
2010-06-13 16:14:23 UTC
Hi im in college, so the cheesy love poems don't cut it for me. i like dark poems, but its hard to find a love poem like that. i want a beautiful love poem by a good poet. if you know any help me out please !! thanks.:)
Four answers:
~~*Milieu*~~
2010-06-13 16:52:57 UTC
One Hundred Love Sonnets: XVIIby Pablo Neruda



I don’t love you as if you were a rose of salt, topaz,

or arrow of carnations that propagate fire:

I love you as one loves certain obscure things,

secretly, between the shadow and the soul.



I love you as the plant that doesn’t bloom but carries

the light of those flowers, hidden, within itself,

and thanks to your love the tight aroma that arose

from the earth lives dimly in my body.



I love you without knowing how, or when, or from where,

I love you directly without problems or pride:

I love you like this because I don’t know any other way to love,

except in this form in which I am not nor are you,

so close that your hand upon my chest is mine,

so close that your eyes close with my dreams.



Translated by Mark Eisner

*****



Gold by Donald Hall



Pale gold of the walls, gold

of the centers of daisies, yellow roses

pressing from a clear bowl. All day

we lay on the bed, my hand

stroking the deep

gold of your thighs and your back.

We slept and woke

entering the golden room together,

lay down in it breathing

quickly, then

slowly again,

caressing and dozing, your hand sleepily

touching my hair now.



We made in those days

tiny identical rooms inside our bodies

which the men who uncover our graves

will find in a thousand years,

shining and whole.



******

Early in the Morning



While the long grain is softening

in the water, gurgling

over a low stove flame, before

the salted Winter Vegetable is sliced

for breakfast, before the birds,

my mother glides an ivory comb

through her hair, heavy

and black as calligrapher's ink.



She sits at the foot of the bed.

My father watches, listens for

the music of comb

against hair.



My mother combs,

pulls her hair back

tight, rolls it

around two fingers, pins it

in a bun to the back of her head.

For half a hundred years she has done this.

My father likes to see it like this.

He says it is kempt.



But I know

it is because of the way

my mother's hair falls

when he pulls the pins out.

Easily, like the curtains

when they untie them in the evening.



by Li-Young Lee



***********



somewhere i have never travelled,gladly beyond

by E. E. Cummings



somewhere i have never travelled,gladly beyond

any experience,your eyes have their silence:

in your most frail gesture are things which enclose me,

or which i cannot touch because they are too near



your slightest look easily will unclose me

though i have closed myself as fingers,

you open always petal by petal myself as Spring opens

(touching skilfully,mysteriously)her first rose



or if your wish be to close me, i and

my life will shut very beautifully ,suddenly,

as when the heart of this flower imagines

the snow carefully everywhere descending;



nothing which we are to perceive in this world equals

the power of your intense fragility:whose texture

compels me with the color of its countries,

rendering death and forever with each breathing



(i do not know what it is about you that closes

and opens;only something in me understands

the voice of your eyes is deeper than all roses)

nobody,not even the rain,has such small hands
Adios
2010-06-13 17:45:51 UTC
A poem that is full of rainbows and butterflies is way too cheesy.

To use commonplace words who do not have substance are simple and easy.



The challenge of finding a dark love poem requires looking for anyone who sadly has a broken heart;

It is then you will find a poem that expresses his or her deepest feelings like a painter and his art.



Roses are Red

My Answer was the Best I could do

I pray that before I go to sleep in my bed

You choose my Answer as Best - I'd be so grateful to you !!
barefoot
2010-06-13 18:46:49 UTC
Unfelt unheard, unseen,

I've left my little queen,

Her languid arms in silver slumber lying:

Ah! through their nestling touch,

Who---who could tell how much

There is for madness---cruel, or complying?



Those faery lids how sleek!

Those lips how moist!---they speak,

In ripest quiet, shadows of sweet sounds:

Into my fancy's ear

Melting a burden dear,

How "Love doth know no fulness, nor no bounds."



True!---tender monitors!

I bend unto your laws:

This sweetest day for dalliance was born!

So, without more ado,

I'll feel my heaven anew,

For all the blushing of the hasty morn.



(John Keats, 1817)
Hello
2010-06-13 17:19:01 UTC
Try some William Butler Yeats maybe? 'The Wild Swans At Coole' is very good.


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