Any ideas how i can improve my poem?

Question

Okay- its SUPPOSED to be the tune too "Bah Bah Black Sheep". Except, each line of Black Sheep has this many syllables: 9,7,9,11,9,7. My poem has these syllables on each line: 8,9,8,9,10,11,8,11!!

Heres my poem:

Stars so bright, shining in the night-
make up a farmiliar sight-
you may have seen them times before-
animals, legends, and much much more-
they group themselves in the sky to be seen-
to be like the brightest, sirius, they dream-
the ancient greeks and romans long ago-
gave them all names, and gave them stories also.

Answer 1

Its a good poem a very good actually and I also agree with Diana that it needs to be completed or extended because it seems incomplete.

Answer 2

its good...and the idea of it is good.



Is that all of it though? it seems like it is hanging on an empty idea, finish it.